Look, I know you're still practicing....
But I seriously didn't think it was good. The graphics were bland, and messy. The animation was choppy and slow. The music was fine, I guess, the sounds were good. The violence was very obvious and repetitive, barely any sort of physics or realistic movements involved...
But I'm just saying. You need to improve your flash skills a lot more in order to make a decent movie. And I do admit, I was sort of impressed that this passed judgement.
Keep trying, I'm just criticizing, it's meant to help you. I want to see you improve! :)
1/5
~Splurgle